If you've seen the trailer it's pretty obvious that the game have some beautiful art, courtesy of the very talented Doomfest. Another thing that you should notice is the beautiful soundtrack. Music is an important factor in a Visual Novel and this one doesn't disappoint.
I will not go into the story in this short article, seeing that this is not a review and just an article made to help promote Dysfunctional System to be Greenlighted. You can read what it is about on Dysfunctional System's Greenlight Page. Don't forget to vote yes for the game too.
If you don't want to wait for the Steam version you can go to Dischan's site and buy Dysfunctional Systems over at their store. It only costs $5 for the first chapter(currently only the first chapter is out) and you also get the game's OST(which is really good).